That was the result of changing names and identifiers around in that paragraph. Think it was originally "the triple-changer's" paint getting seared off.
Glad you like the combat scene - that was what I spent most of the month of fighting with this story over. So very, very hard to do, too, but I'm hoping it gets easier with practice.
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Glad you like the combat scene - that was what I spent most of the month of fighting with this story over. So very, very hard to do, too, but I'm hoping it gets easier with practice.