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beckyh2112) wrote2010-04-06 07:46 am
beckyh2112) wrote2010-04-06 07:46 am
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[Jeeko Week] Fic: Please
Jeeko Week
Title: Please
Rating: R
Word Count: 300+
Summary: Zuko has difficulty with the word.
Please
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His skin glows with heat. So does the lieutenant's, and a dim, gold-bronze light pushes back the shadows in his cabin.
Uncle never told him about this. Or maybe he hadn't listened; who cared about love and sex? He had to find the Avatar, capture him, bring him back in chains for Father.
Jee's mouth skims the line of his jaw. Zuko feels the pool of warmth in his stomach twist, and he tips his head back. 'Please', his lips shape as Jee's whiskers scrape his jaw and the lieutenant kisses the sensitive skin below his ear. His tongue flicks out, and Zuko jerks against the older man, eyes going wide.
He isn't used to this. Soft, deliberate kisses that seem to know places on his own body he never realized were so sensitive. Warm hands on his skin, stroking little embers of sensation to life. Scarred, hot body pressing him down onto the bed.
He pants shallowly, fingers digging into Jee's back. 'Please', he tries to say again, but the word gets lost somewhere between his mind and his mouth. The lieutenant's thumb rubs circles near his hip, and he is oh-so-carefully sucking on the skin below Zuko's ear. The prince's skin still remembers the feel of Jee's hands touching, Jee's mouth licking and kissing-
Zuko tilts his head back and blows flame.
It doesn't cool him. If anything, it makes him more aware of the lieutenant's heat. Of the slide of skin against his own skin, the texture of scars under his hands, the hardness brushing tantalizingly against his own-
Jee reaches up and takes hold of one of Zuko's wrists, and he lets the lieutenant. Lets himself be moved, guided. (Commanded.) He wonders at the way it makes his face warm and his skin feel more sensitive.
The lieutenant pulls back from his kissing, tilts his head to kiss the center of Zuko's palm, at the chi-point flame emerges from.
Zuko bucks beneath him. 'Please, please, please!' He shapes it like a mantra, almost whimpering as Jee's tongue traces the inner side of his thumb, leaving sparks of remembered sensation behind.
His other hand digs into Jee's back, and flame licks out with the lieutenant's next breath. He moves against Zuko then, a slow, deliberate piston of his hips, and Zuko moans.
"Please."
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Title: Please
Rating: R
Word Count: 300+
Summary: Zuko has difficulty with the word.
***
His skin glows with heat. So does the lieutenant's, and a dim, gold-bronze light pushes back the shadows in his cabin.
Uncle never told him about this. Or maybe he hadn't listened; who cared about love and sex? He had to find the Avatar, capture him, bring him back in chains for Father.
Jee's mouth skims the line of his jaw. Zuko feels the pool of warmth in his stomach twist, and he tips his head back. 'Please', his lips shape as Jee's whiskers scrape his jaw and the lieutenant kisses the sensitive skin below his ear. His tongue flicks out, and Zuko jerks against the older man, eyes going wide.
He isn't used to this. Soft, deliberate kisses that seem to know places on his own body he never realized were so sensitive. Warm hands on his skin, stroking little embers of sensation to life. Scarred, hot body pressing him down onto the bed.
He pants shallowly, fingers digging into Jee's back. 'Please', he tries to say again, but the word gets lost somewhere between his mind and his mouth. The lieutenant's thumb rubs circles near his hip, and he is oh-so-carefully sucking on the skin below Zuko's ear. The prince's skin still remembers the feel of Jee's hands touching, Jee's mouth licking and kissing-
Zuko tilts his head back and blows flame.
It doesn't cool him. If anything, it makes him more aware of the lieutenant's heat. Of the slide of skin against his own skin, the texture of scars under his hands, the hardness brushing tantalizingly against his own-
Jee reaches up and takes hold of one of Zuko's wrists, and he lets the lieutenant. Lets himself be moved, guided. (Commanded.) He wonders at the way it makes his face warm and his skin feel more sensitive.
The lieutenant pulls back from his kissing, tilts his head to kiss the center of Zuko's palm, at the chi-point flame emerges from.
Zuko bucks beneath him. 'Please, please, please!' He shapes it like a mantra, almost whimpering as Jee's tongue traces the inner side of his thumb, leaving sparks of remembered sensation behind.
His other hand digs into Jee's back, and flame licks out with the lieutenant's next breath. He moves against Zuko then, a slow, deliberate piston of his hips, and Zuko moans.
"Please."
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I will be in my bunk
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If you had posted this few hours earlier, I could have given this text all the attention it needs. But now my mum and siblings are home. Curses of not having an own computer. *mumblegrumble*
That's it, Jeeko is one of my best OTPs. I blame you for this. ^^
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It's a fun OTP. Very brief time as lovers, but they leave marks, imo.
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TY!
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The entire concept of Zuko having difficulty vocalizing the word "please" is so VERY in-character. :)
I thought that this line was brilliant: "Zuko tilts his head back and blows flame." I think I share a bit of personal headcanon with people in that I believe that firebenders, well, are literally hot in bed, in some respects. ;)
But seriously, I love the rapport between these two in bed in this fic. :) Gorgeous. A very good read! Thank you very much! :D
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I hope you're not expecting a more coherent comment out of me. Cause my brain's kinda in a melted puddle on the floor.
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Heh. *gets the mop and bucket*
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Firebenders are very warm when they get on well. ^_^
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And then saw the Jeeko Week list. And found this. And oh, so much love. You bring the scene alive, and the sensations are so damn vivid.
Beautiful. This is like, exactly what I was looking for.
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