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[beckyh2112]

So I started reading this amazingly OOC Elita porn fic this morning. Sadly, it held my attention through the loving detail on how she had been tortured and broken. Well, 'held my attention' in so far as I didn't outright close it, though I did wander off from it quite a lot.

Then someone uttered a question in dialogue without using a question mark, and I went "gah!" and closed it.

I am such a grammar-geek.

Comments

[seiberwing.livejournal.com]

In all fairness, they'd have disabled that and any other weapon systems before they got down to business. But then again, she could have used the power then and things wouldn't even have gotten to the gangrape point.

...why did Elita have that power again, anyway?

[beckyh2112.livejournal.com]

Because Alpha Trion wanted an excuse to muck around in her insides and make Optimus have to repair her.

God only knows, but I tend to lay it at Alpha Trion's feet.

[seiberwing.livejournal.com]

Alpha Trion is a pervy old man, is what he is.