beckyh2112: (Astrotrain!)
Rebecca Hb. ([personal profile] beckyh2112) wrote2006-07-24 10:49 pm

31_days - Triple-Changer Threesome

Concrit on Octane's characterization would be appreciated. I'm pretty sure Blitzwing and Astrotrain are also a bit off here; I need to rewatch "God Gambit" and "Triple Takeover".

Title: Target Practice
Day/Theme: July 24, 'How does it feel when you're inside me?'
Series: G1 Transformers
Character/Pairing: Astrotrain/Blitzwing/Octane
Rating: R
Summary: Blitzwing tries to correct Octane's shooting stance.

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Blitzwing pressed up against Octane's back, hands sliding along the other triple-changer's lower arms before settling over his hands. And then trying to break his fingers, from the feel of it. "C'mon, get your grip right. You'll never shoot straight if you hold your gun like that."

Octane loosened his fingers and let the tank triple-changer move his hands. "Hey! I can shoot! I hit that Autobot carrying the EMP, didn't I?"

"By accident," Astrotrain pointed out, his deck-plating vibrating softly under their feet. "When you were providing 'cover fire'."

"You can't just wave your gun around all the time," Blitzwing said, the air distortions from his vocoder playing lightly over the side of Octane's helm. "Someday that luck of yours is gonna run out. So let's try to get that stance right, eh?" He slipped one leg between Octane's thighs, nudging the tanker-truck triple-changer's legs a little further apart.

"If he fires that in me, I'm dumping you both, and you can walk back," Astrotrain said.

"I'm not going to do that-! Hey, wing!"

"And it's a nice wing, too." Blitzwing nuzzled it again, hands tightening around Octane's. "S'angular."

"Yeah, but-" Octane's hands convulsed as Blitzwing gave his wing a quick lick.

"Don't shoot!"

Octane whimpered. "'Train, make him stop..."

"Frag that! Shove him up against the bulkhead, Blitzwing, so I can feel this too!"

[identity profile] navigatorsghost.livejournal.com 2006-07-25 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
*thud* Oh, I love this. Absolutely love it. I don't think you've got Octane wrong to be honest, at least not in a short fic - if you were going to expand this I'd suggest more snarking on all sides, but then writing snarky 'Con dialogue is one of those things it's easy to spend all day doing. :)

Also, love your use/subversion of the provided theme. Ah, the joys of TFdom... refreshes the parts other fandoms don't have physical access to... ;)

[identity profile] ravenclaw-devi.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Devi likes muchly!

[identity profile] beckyh2112.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay!

*plays with her darling triple-changers*