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So I started reading this amazingly OOC Elita porn fic this morning. Sadly, it held my attention through the loving detail on how she had been tortured and broken. Well, 'held my attention' in so far as I didn't outright close it, though I did wander off from it quite a lot.

Then someone uttered a question in dialogue without using a question mark, and I went "gah!" and closed it.

I am such a grammar-geek.

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I'm not surprised, rather sadly. Ties in to the idea that a woman (a powerful one, no less) eventually enjoys that treatment.

Based on the way the fic is going, we've got at least three more chapters. One for each of the Constructicons that haven't gone yet.

Now, do you want to put money on Devastator being pulled out?

Not in the least, it seems to be what it's building up to.

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks that.

A stereotypical gangrape conducted by a combiner group? It's obvious.

I'm kind of curious as to whether Elita is going to be dead by the end of this fic or not.

...now that I didn't even think about. And I will now continue to do so.

Given that if I were writing a fic with this premise, she'd be dead before the end of chapter one by her own hand...

Agreed.

...because the Decepticons are so totally going to let her go if she plays for them, as if they couldn't get that on their own.

Because the Decepticons totally wouldn't torture her friends anyway if she plays for them. I mean, dude, come on.

I swear, all she has to do is turn on that time-stop power of hers and leave it on until her lasercore extinguishes.

In all fairness, they'd have disabled that and any other weapon systems before they got down to business. But then again, she could have used the power then and things wouldn't even have gotten to the gangrape point.

...why did Elita have that power again, anyway?

Because Alpha Trion wanted an excuse to muck around in her insides and make Optimus have to repair her.

God only knows, but I tend to lay it at Alpha Trion's feet.

Alpha Trion is a pervy old man, is what he is.

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